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The night wind is a tricksy one, siren song for miles.
They live
           and love
                       and brave the waves,

    and when they drown,

she smiles.
Someone insists I can be a poet. ;p
So behold my latest attempt!

The layout and title are last minute additions, and very experimental ones at that. I had fun with it though. Let me know what you think. :)

Feedback is always helpful!
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harliequin's avatar
I like the title, it's clever. After reading the piece, I can imagine a smiling siren beckoning with a beauty queen wave. Love the simplicity of the rhyme scheme and the rhythm.