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Left Behind.

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Long goodbyes, time passes,
 ...still hurts.
Trying something new. [My very first six word story!]

I see people writing beautiful six word stories, I just wanted to have a go.

Let me know how I did, okay? Any help/advice/corrections welcome.
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Aliana-chan's avatar

Beautifully bittersweet story in only six words. As someone who experienced many types of abadonment from being ditch to a death of a loved one, it is very relatable and painful to read. So true that no matter how much time has passed from an event like that, a small wound will always remain on my heart which most probably won't ever heal.